Mind the Gap and Dubstep
Ride the beat
with
thumping
thoughts
reverberating
inside
your
seclusion.
Let it take
your
heart
from
its
tap
dance
on wooden
emotion
to a
mixed
movement
of electric
expression.
Life is
too
fleeting
in its
parenthesis
to stay
glued
inside
lines
drawn
by judgment's
hand.
If there is
no
partner
who wishes
to
dance
to a
beat
of a
foreign
drum,
break
into
solo
steps
that
take
your
feet
beyond
expectation.
©Susie Clevenger 2012
Comments
And isn't that a splendid example of the sound and dance. So nicely understated.
Ooo....I LOVE that! A perfect fit!
But my favorite-favorite is *foreign drum*......oh, how I am so happy to embrace that beat.........
Have a creative New Year!
I look forward to reading your work in 2013!
All Hail the Dubstep Goat!
(who knew?)
lol
*hugs*
Mimi
The Goat Borrower
I hear poems when there’s no one there
”Let it take your heart… to.. eclectic expression”
Hearts bursting in air, gave proof through the night
“Life is too fleeting in its parenthesis to stay glued inside lines…”
Footloose… kick off your Sunday shoes
“..break into solo steps…”
It isn’t raining rain, you know, it’s raining solo steps
So when you see goats upon the hill….
Your poem inspired me.
Randy
"Life is
too fleeting
in its
parenthesis
to stay
glued
inside lines
drawn
by judgment's
hand."
Great writing!!