Valley of Doors



Though I sit
in a valley of doors
I will not fear
the mirrors
hidden behind them.

My eyes will not
look for every flaw
nor cry at every unrealistic
comparison.

No longer will I see myself
through the broken mirror
of another’s judgmental expression.

I am me…unique and beautiful.
Words that have hurt me
are now replaced by those
that celebrate who I am.


©Susie Clevenger 2012
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Comments

Laurie Kolp said…
Amazing piece, Susie. The first stanza floored me. The fear, comparison, judgement are all so fitting in how many perceive themselves... and I love the way you have turned it around into a positive ending. This should be a daily meditation.
September 4, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Brian Miller said…
i may have commented on this one already, but sitting here in the high school getting ready for class it is all the more real as i watch the students rolling in...and their uncertainties right on their heals...
September 4, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Teresa said…
This is wonderful! It's what every young lady should read to realize that she should not be judged for her looks.
September 4, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Kerry O'Connor said…
This is an excellent psalm for the modern woman, and one that should be pinned beside the bathroom /bedroom mirror. Very clever, and thought-provoking response to the image.
September 4, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Susan said…
I found your poem through the Creative Nexus! That's pretty neat.

I love your use of the 23rd Psalm to point at another fear that hits many like death. Through that meter and familiar cadence, you provide the affirmation--and hint of God--necessary to honor the self. Nicely done.
September 4, 2012 at 3:05 PM
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