The Haiku Challenge Day #5 ~ Acrostic Haiku



pursed lips, sour tongue
rail their condemnation
yellow teeth of rage
  
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saffron horizon
umber smudges mix with gold
night is impatient
























fluttering pleating
an artistic seduction
nature of flirting



©Susie Clevenger 2012
Image 1: Photobucket
Image 2: Photograph: Bettina Marchello
Image 3: Painting:
Woman with Fan, Edoardo Tofano
This is Day 5 of  29 Haiku in 29 Days
Today's Theme: UR Choice Acrostic Haiku

Comments

Anonymous said…
Lov that :)
February 4, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Anonymous said…
I love the impatient night!
February 4, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Asni said…
Wow! All very nice. Love your take on fan.
February 4, 2012 at 6:54 PM
Cressida said…
The fan one is excellent.
February 4, 2012 at 7:55 PM
Maude Lynn said…
I love that second one!
February 4, 2012 at 8:08 PM
... said…
Sun,is nicely and strongly painted.
Magnificent Haiku.
February 4, 2012 at 8:26 PM
Scarlet said…
Nice that you use different words with pictures...perfect ~

this was quite a challenge, isn't it ~
February 4, 2012 at 8:26 PM
Andy Sewina said…
Nice 3, but sun gets my vote!
February 4, 2012 at 9:26 PM
Karen said…
I like them all! I love the coyness of the fan.
February 4, 2012 at 11:21 PM
Lilly said…
love them all! but especially the second one :)
February 5, 2012 at 12:14 AM
Chèvrefeuille said…
Awesome triplet of acrostic haiku, thank you Susie for sharing. The one about the sun is ... perfect.
February 5, 2012 at 4:02 AM
Amber said…
I love the last two. :)
February 5, 2012 at 4:16 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said…
I do so like the idea of night being impatient!

Not Acrostic, but My Choice!
February 5, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Grace said…
Picture and words complement perfectly ~
February 5, 2012 at 8:32 AM
becca givens said…
OMG -- three -- I had trouble with one! :-)

The "sun" was my favorite. The imagery was perfect to perk my spirits.

Nice job, Susie, as always!! Thank you for sharing ~~ Happy Sunday!
February 5, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Someone is Special said…
Susies,I loved your take.. Loved it..

Someone is Special
February 6, 2012 at 3:19 PM
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