The Haiku Challenge Day #5 ~ Acrostic Haiku



pursed lips, sour tongue
rail their condemnation
yellow teeth of rage
  
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saffron horizon
umber smudges mix with gold
night is impatient
























fluttering pleating
an artistic seduction
nature of flirting



©Susie Clevenger 2012
Image 1: Photobucket
Image 2: Photograph: Bettina Marchello
Image 3: Painting:
Woman with Fan, Edoardo Tofano
This is Day 5 of  29 Haiku in 29 Days
Today's Theme: UR Choice Acrostic Haiku

Comments

Anonymous said…
Lov that :)
Anonymous said…
I love the impatient night!
Asni said…
Wow! All very nice. Love your take on fan.
Cressida said…
The fan one is excellent.
Maude Lynn said…
I love that second one!
... said…
Sun,is nicely and strongly painted.
Magnificent Haiku.
Scarlet said…
Nice that you use different words with pictures...perfect ~

this was quite a challenge, isn't it ~
Andy Sewina said…
Nice 3, but sun gets my vote!
Karen said…
I like them all! I love the coyness of the fan.
Lilly said…
love them all! but especially the second one :)
Awesome triplet of acrostic haiku, thank you Susie for sharing. The one about the sun is ... perfect.
Amber said…
I love the last two. :)
I do so like the idea of night being impatient!

Not Acrostic, but My Choice!
Grace said…
Picture and words complement perfectly ~
becca givens said…
OMG -- three -- I had trouble with one! :-)

The "sun" was my favorite. The imagery was perfect to perk my spirits.

Nice job, Susie, as always!! Thank you for sharing ~~ Happy Sunday!
Susies,I loved your take.. Loved it..

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