Polished Ego


     a horse riding knight                
does not arouse my romantic thoughts
i need no saving

a polished ego
that views me helpless female
incurs my disdain

requesting to aide
when seeing I am in need
receives my respect

that does not imply
i have no ability
just I might need help

©Susie Clevenger 2011
Image:Tumblir 

OSI Prompt 198: Knight
One Single Impression

Comments

Ramesh Sood said…
We all need help. Susie.. well written..
December 13, 2011 at 3:21 AM
The Unknowngnome said…
Poor knight, maybe the wizard has a heart for him. :(
December 13, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Jim said…
Susie, I like this take showing the thoughts of the modern female.

It mirrors the way I hope am treating these ladies. Still, she might need a little help now and then. Doesn't everyone?
..
December 13, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Harshad Mehta said…
Yes, a dominating person is a strong turn off!
December 13, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Maude Lynn said…
Oh, exactly! I love this one.
December 13, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Ron. said…
It's clear you need no help writing, m'lady. Well done! Enjoyed the way you sidled up to the prompt.
December 13, 2011 at 5:46 PM
SandyCarlson said…
Mutual respect is far more appealing than condescending--other stuff. Well said.
December 13, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Anonymous said…
I'm a sucker for gallantry myself. Love your haiku, though.
December 14, 2011 at 5:10 AM
kaykuala said…
A lady though appearing weak has strength. A polished ego may be surprised to discover the truth. Great write Susie!

Hank
December 14, 2011 at 5:11 AM
Chèvrefeuille said…
I am sure that even you can use sometimes some help ... well a knight in shining armour ...
Love tis poem well done
December 15, 2011 at 9:34 PM
Bodhirose said…
I like the idea of aiding but not "saving". Well done--important message.
December 16, 2011 at 8:53 PM
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