Polished Ego


     a horse riding knight                
does not arouse my romantic thoughts
i need no saving

a polished ego
that views me helpless female
incurs my disdain

requesting to aide
when seeing I am in need
receives my respect

that does not imply
i have no ability
just I might need help

©Susie Clevenger 2011
Image:Tumblir 

OSI Prompt 198: Knight

Comments

Ramesh Sood said…
We all need help. Susie.. well written..
Poor knight, maybe the wizard has a heart for him. :(
Jim said…
Susie, I like this take showing the thoughts of the modern female.

It mirrors the way I hope am treating these ladies. Still, she might need a little help now and then. Doesn't everyone?
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Harshad Mehta said…
Yes, a dominating person is a strong turn off!
Maude Lynn said…
Oh, exactly! I love this one.
Ron. said…
It's clear you need no help writing, m'lady. Well done! Enjoyed the way you sidled up to the prompt.
SandyCarlson said…
Mutual respect is far more appealing than condescending--other stuff. Well said.
Anonymous said…
I'm a sucker for gallantry myself. Love your haiku, though.
kaykuala said…
A lady though appearing weak has strength. A polished ego may be surprised to discover the truth. Great write Susie!

Hank
I am sure that even you can use sometimes some help ... well a knight in shining armour ...
Love tis poem well done
Bodhirose said…
I like the idea of aiding but not "saving". Well done--important message.