The Fourteen Lines Never Rhyme


There is clumsiness to love.
It doesn’t matter how well
we’ve learned the dance steps
or find pleasure in the music,
the ballroom is made of ice. 

In ballet shoes with blades,
there is a risk my partner
and I might slip into a scene
from “The War of the Roses."

We have been married forever.
Oh, I know it is an exaggeration,
but when there are more memories
after the ring than before it,
time is measured by anniversaries.

Romance is a bit different
when the flowers fade.
It is more a bouquet
of prescriptions hoping
one will be a pill to assist with
more bon mots than comic acidic.

Please don’t be fooled that in the graying
and moaning there is no devotion.
Our marriage is a poetry slam
of love sonnets that confuses an audience
because the fourteen lines never rhyme. 

©Susie Clevenger 2024

Having a bit of fun at my husband and my expense.

For those who might not get "The War of the Roses" reference
it is a book/movie about how a seemingly perfect marriage
deteriorates into a battle over wealth and possessions. 




 

Comments

Sherry Blue Sky said…
I enjoyed this poem so much, the more so as I know you adore each other. The bouquet of prescriptions made me smile. How wonderful to live a lifelong love like yours.
Fireblossom said…
You may have been fooling around, Susie, but that opening stanza had strong notes of Plath to it. I was surprised when the poem evened out and its teeth turned out to be dentures!
Brendan said…
Long love outlasts any of its descriptions, ellipses or dance halls, but it surely is the enduring comedy. Miraculous, inane, rare and insane. My wife and I have been at almost 30 years and neither the marvel nor the difficulty of it have ebbed. Thanks for bowering it with this banana peel. Loved it.
Jennifer Wagner said…
Yep, yep. You've said it right and said it true, Susie!
Dora said…
So many "bon mots," so many smiles (on my face) of recognition and delight, the slippery ballroom of ice, the "forever," "bouquet of prescriptions," and the "poetry slam of love sonnets," and the un-rhymes, the synchronicity that no one else could possibly understand. A wonder of a poem, Susie.
Mary said…
I love this, Susie. So many wonderful details that work together so well to make a complete whole. A bit of fun indeed!