Honey Sweet January 29, 2017 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Every poem needn’t carry a burden, a weight too hard to digest, be brave enough for honeyed words and the glow of cinnamon light. ©Susie Clevenger 2017 Real Toads Mini Challenge ~ Condense a Poem Comments brudberg said… Indeed... we need some lightness... love the honey verb. Iris said… This is perfect. Anonymous said… Well said delight purplepeninportland.com said… Wonderful, Susie! I love, 'the glow of cinnamon light.' Rosemary Nissen-Wade said… Definitely we should add that cinnamon! Kim M. Russell said… Beautifully put, Susie. I love your honeyed words and especially 'the glow of cinnamon light'. Debi Swim said… "a weight too hard to digest" exactly what I felt too. Love the "honeyed words and cinnamon light" Sherry Blue Sky said… "Every poem needn't carry a burden".........as so many do in these troubled times. Well expressed, Susie. Other Mary said… That is such a simple and profound distillation. Magaly Guerrero said… I want to eat this with a cup of tea. "...be brave enough for honeyed words". Love that! Margaret said… ...the glow of cinnamon light... I see I'm not the only admirer of that phrase! Bekkie Sanchez said… Yummy!
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