Haiku Heights #266 ~ Time July 21, 2013 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps hands race to erase life’s moments with obsession time leaves us unwound © Susie Clevenger Haiku Heights #266 ~ Time Comments Ellecee said… "time leaves us unwound" and so it can and often does,,, :-) Words of wisdom,Susie,, Maude Lynn said… That's really lovely, Susie. Anonymous said… I love it, powerful words and so true Anonymous said… Indeed! Lotus said… Artfully written. This is lovely. kalpana solsi said… Lovely Haiku Nanka said… Only time can tell!! ;) Vaishali Jain said… Beautiful, Susie.Powerful words, these. Reading Pleasure said… wonderful, Susan Siggi in Downeast Maine said… "Time unwound"...??? like "one nerve left ????"My lame attempt at humor...do like the line.PeaceSiggi Anonymous said… It is hard not to try to pack each moment with activity. But your haiku remind us to take life more leisurely! Reshma said… Time does know how to wind us up, loved your take Susie :) Tigerbrite said… Erasing life's moments.Let's hope we remember the good ones:) Magical Mystical Teacher said… That's exactly how I feel: unwound!Sleeping the Night Unknown said… "Hands race to erase". Yes we do wanna erase those moments we wish to. Lovely Susie !! Maggie Grace said… Love how you wove your haiku into a kind of riddle/play on words. Really well done! Sara McNulty said… Just wonderful use of words, Susie!
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Powerful words, these.
??? like "one nerve left ????"
My lame attempt at humor...
do like the line.
Peace
Siggi
Let's hope we remember the good ones:)
Sleeping the Night