Conjuring up juke joint ghosts
in a metal chord voodoo
of fingers using a slide on strings
the guitar player hypnotizes souls
to give their bodies to rhythm.
Blues mingles with the smoke
of cigarettes, liquor, and voices
to spread its gospel to ears
that want to hear the bayou
preached on a Saturday night.
Amen’s of “Play it boy” pour
from the faithful who have
spent their week jumping
through hoops for the man
and just want to forget about
what it takes to make a dollar.
A broken Lone Star beer clock
hangs above the head
of the guitarist and his silver slide
evoking a faux hallo glow
as his music invites his tipsy following
to have another drink and give
a generous offering to their waitress.
©Susie Clevenger 2012
Comments
This is wonderful! I went in the same direction as you, kind of~
I added the train element(it was in the video and made me think of steel track and strings). I love yours:
" Conjuring up juke joint ghosts
in a metal chord voodoo
of fingers using a slide on strings
the guitar player hypnotizes souls
to give their bodies to rhythm."
This is magical! :D
you put us right there in that smoke-filled room!
good one!!
♥
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That last stanza captures him very well ~ Great job ~
We thought they'd never end...
A great vision conjoured up there, Susie, and your friend Mike can really play!
with your lips
so karma
will return with joy."
With your permission, I shall copy this into MY writing journal. Brilliant!!!
BTW~ THRILLED to know you a feeling better.