Review and Anticipation


so  many tears fell
in this year of too much pain
a solemn review

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writing my savior
my pen gave heartbreak a voice
healing poetry

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 anticipating
arrival of a new year
joy of brighter days



©Susie Clevenger 2011

Sensational Haiku Wednesday Prompt: Review
Sensational Haiku Wednesday

Comments

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said…
We are feeling the same way about this waning year - I'll certainly be glad to bid it adieu!

I wish you a very Happy New Year, and many joys for 2012.

Thanks for joining us at Sensational Haiku Wednesday! So great to have you with us.
December 28, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Anonymous said…
I love the first, especially: "too much pain, a solemn review." You said much, well, in few words. Bravo.

~Shawna
(rosemarymint.wordpress.com)
December 28, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Ben Ditty said…
My heart jumped when I saw your Poe book. I HAVE THE SAME ONE :D :D
December 28, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Shauna said…
poignant, hemmed with sweetness.
December 28, 2011 at 7:53 PM
Sheila said…
Healing poetry-I like that. Also the second photo is my fav!
December 28, 2011 at 11:56 PM
Anonymous said…
Susie -- I love the first image ... I can relate to how the angel appears to "feel" ... sets the tone for the title and the post ... love the entire set ... HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
December 29, 2011 at 1:12 AM
anthonynorth said…
Great hope in the last. As it should be.
December 29, 2011 at 2:47 AM
Chantell said…
I wish for you a much brighter 2012 :o) Lovely poetry, as always! xx
December 29, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thanks Jen...May your New Year be filled with Blessings!!
December 29, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Cool Ben...I just got mine about a month a go. I love Poe. He is the reason I started writing poetry in the first place.
December 29, 2011 at 11:29 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thanks Sheila...I looked through google for an image to use..and then thought why not take a picture of my own journal of poetry :)
December 29, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thanks Becca...Happy New Year!!!
December 29, 2011 at 11:49 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thank you Chantell..Happy New Year!!
December 29, 2011 at 11:55 PM
Beyond Horizon said…
writing a savior...How True!

Loved the second pic by you :)
December 31, 2011 at 2:14 AM
Mary said…
Very well penned. (and I liked the photos too.) Indeed poetry can be a 'savior' during difficult times. May your new year bring you bright days!
December 31, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Anonymous said…
the first one is really sad

happy new year

Five Senryu of Review
December 31, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Ostensible Truth said…
loved the structure of this and this line in particular - "my pen gave heartbreak a voice
healing poetry" - the pictures were well used throughout and great short form writes! enjoyed! happy new year :)
January 1, 2012 at 10:44 AM
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