Chiseled Lips July 05, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Madonna stands in her stone garden silent, marble hands in prayer, my sins the beads of her rosary. Forgiveness resting on a petition coming from chiseled lips that have no voice. ©Susie Clevenger 2011 Poetry Palace Comments Ron said… I like it ! It has something ! Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said… This is fun,well done.:) Rachana Shakyawar said… '....stands in the stone...'Yet looks true...like speaking through the silence! And rosary reflecting something real face of tough life..!Love the prose!!So inspiring!!!~Keep the Spark ALive.. Anonymous said… :) the figurative rosary and metaphor, nice twist :)http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/down-the-line-in-plain-sight/ Isadora said… I particpated in a challenge that had to do with Sacred Music. I have listed it below.Your poem resonates a great message in the connection with the rosary beads as a symbol of more.Well done ... I enjoyed this.Isadorahttp://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/11/18/the-benedictine-monastery-academy/ Old Raven said… And stone speaks ... wonderful! JANU said… Sounds like a prayer...nice.
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well done.
:)
Yet looks true...like speaking through the silence! And rosary reflecting something real face of tough life..!
Love the prose!!
So inspiring!!!
~Keep the Spark ALive..
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/down-the-line-in-plain-sight/
Your poem resonates a great message in the connection with the rosary beads as a symbol of more.
Well done ... I enjoyed this.
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/11/18/the-benedictine-monastery-academy/