"I am hearing poetry when awake,
dreaming poetry when asleep,
breathing poetry with each breath,
I am living in a poem."
© Copyright Susie Clevenger 2011
"All I found were memorieswearing winter overcoats"I love the words, and the metaphoric imagery of clothing used in this piece. Perfect photo chosen too. Beautiful, Susie.
Thank you Ginny
Beautiful poem, Susie. Great line--the one Ginny points out. Great little poem! Love the picture, too! Nice post!http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/
That is positively beautiful. I loved it; I wished I'd wrote it.By the way, can you really remember all those things you commented about? You reminded me that, yes, I wore one of those P.O.W. bracelets too.Larry
You are so wonderful with your words finding memories wearing winter coats I think this is how we feel with some memories they feel so coldhttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/
light, sweet, yummy! a good one suzie and tq for coming by!
Very well done..
those last two lines are great! =)
Your wardrobe references paint an effective picture. Good job.
I love the naked roses pulling at your coat. A wonderful image and original use of personification!
New memories will be created after the snow melts. Store the old ones away in your heart for they make us what we are but take consolance in the fact that with new memories, we will continue to flower and grow :)
Your images are so rich. I could feel every word, Susie! I love your poetry. ♥
please comment to let us know after you are done returning favors and making a minimum 18 comments,Happy Rally.Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.love this, elegant.
You have a lovely blog, a beautiful smile and this poem was sheer beauty loveliness. How wonderful to be so steeped in poetry!
Very beautiful poem, Susie. I was anticipating something good, as the title alone is terrific. You've hinted that there is a potential for re-growth and renewal in the depth of winter, but that the winter stillness is so cold and complete, you couldn't find it!
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