Moon in the Wild


I sit quietly on a tree stump,
still as a windless night,
and as aware as the 
wild things that stare
with their night vision.

I feel their questions
travel my skin in their inhales
as they assess whether 
I am friend or foe.

In the November chill
alone attempts to threaten
with shadows snapping twigs
on the path behind me.

But I am not afraid because
the moon comes closer
to the pines above me
to reveal a doe trusts
I’m not her enemy. 

Susie Clevenger 2025

Comments

Sherry Blue Sky said…
Susie, of course you know how much I love this beautiful poem. The deer, the moonlight........magical. At What's Going On, we are contemplating nature this week, with just such moments of really SEEING and being in the natural world. Your poem would be a gift there, but only if you have time, as I know how busy you are right now. Your poem is a beauty. I love it so much.
Sherry Blue Sky said…
So glad you joined us, Susie. Your poem reminds me of a dear friend of mine, now in the spirit world. He used to walk through the world saying a silent "I love you" to everything his eyes fell upon, a tree, a shrub, a rock, a dog..........and he said after a bit, he could feel everything loving him back. I feel some of that as I walk through the beauty surrounding me. I feel so much love and gratitude, and I feel it being received (especially by dogs! LOL)
Truedessa said…
I could feel this poem through my very being. I have been there is the woods listening and waiting for the natural world to speak to me. I once encountered
a buck in the silence. Thank you for this wondrous poem!
Susan said…
"I feel their questions
travel my skin in their inhales"
Oh, yes! And then the deer answers--nothing to fear here!
Mary said…
A beautifully meditative poem! A poem of faith. I love the idea of all of the eyes in the woods looking and the lack of fear. You are 'one' with them.
Marja said…
Wow what a sweet soft beautiful poem and this is stunning "I feel their questions travel my skin in their inhales"
Sumana Roy said…
"...as aware as the
wild things..."----Yes, awareness and oneness is all over, meditating in silence. Such moments are so precious when we become aware of that too and be still. I so love the meditative tone of the poem.
Anonymous said…
“I feel their questions
travel my skin in their inhales"

Gorgeous way to express that feeling. Love the moon lighting up the doe. (Sara)