Coffee Philosopher


Does a day forget
it is born from sunlight
or is it too enamored
with songbirds to know
 it has been set free of shadows.

January’s cold breath has robbed
the grass of its emerald blades
while cardinals sit as rubies
on limbs mimicking flames
that have found their voice to sing.

Seven A.M always remembers
to play its brutish alarm, to bully
me to crawl out of dreams
I’d like to live from my pillow.

My grumbles anesthetized by a cup of coffee
I walk to my back door to watch the ballet
of birds dance color into winter’s gray.

A sleepy philosopher, I contemplate 
the light and dark of what I always remember,
and what I cannot forget. 

©Susie Clevenger 2025 






 

Comments

Mary said…
Wow, Susie, just WOW. An intricate, creative write! (I wish there was a way I could look back at your poem as I comment...I know it is in the settings...as there are some wonderful lines I wish I could respond you, but I can only see the comment box.)
Mary said…
" Seven A.M always remembers
to play its brutish alarm, to bully
me to crawl out of dreams "

I really like this. Such a creative thought. Who would have pictured a clock time remembering? You, of course. And that alarm IS brutish, isn't it?
Rajani said…
I especially love the first worse...does the day know?? Lovely....
Jae Rose said…
What an absolutely perfect poem - everything builds perfectly into that stellar last line
Sherry Blue Sky said…
Loved it from first line to last. Wonderful.
Kim M. Russell said…
I love this poem, Susie, from ‘Does a day forget it is born from sunlight’ to ‘birds dancing color into winter’s gray’.
Sumana Roy said…
This is such a beautiful poem, Susie! "while cardinals sit as rubies / on limbs mimicking flames / that have found their voice to sing."...These are some unforgettable lines bringing warmth in the icy cold scene.
Fireblossom said…
This is so beautiful in its very simplicity, Susie. I love this so much. Your opening stanza sets the rest up perfectly, and as someone who watches the birds at my feeders every morning, it touched me personally--not just because of that, but for a host of reasons, this touched my heart. One oif my all time favorites of yours.
Truedessa said…
Truly a wonderful poem reflecting on the day. The birds add a touch of wonder.