"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Sunday, July 15, 2018

Send ~ Tricube

sends its dust
to the west

in ochre 
infused clouds

complaints sung
through the nose

romance sends
its flower
to blossom

in fertile
pining ground
of heartsick

the pruning
no requires

please do not
send love notes
to litter

my mailbox
with pink heart

is the fruit
on my tongue

©Susie Clevenger 2018


Anonymous said...

I really like how you've worked this form Susie - especially the first series! That was so original a thought, and idea - in the literal reading, as well as the idea of "we are all of the same dust" .... and the last one had me chuckling for the cleverness!

Vandana Sharma said...

I am in love with the second poem, so true words of a true love!

ayala said...

Lovely gems!

annell said...

I love each of your poems.

jo said...

These are wonderful!

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Love this especially; "realism is the fruit
on my tongue."💖

Marian said...

Oh, I love all three!! Really good, Susie, packing a punch, each one. I adore them. I think the first is my favorite because the subject is unexpected. But I really think these all are terrific.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Apologies for the dust cloud.. surely from the North.


I enjoyed each poem, Susie. You always bring a touch of realism to your themes.

Sara McNulty said...

These are all wonderful, Susie. I love that middle set best.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

They're all brilliant!

hyperCRYPTICal said...

I love all three, especially the first with its clever close. Atishoo!
Anna :o]

Carrie Van Horn said...

Each line is lovely Susie!! As always. :-) I wanted to let you know that I started a blog prompt site that is similar to Magpie Tales. A picture posts on Sunday and you have all week to link up and join. I know you may be too busy with family needs and such, but I wanted to invite you to join us anyway. Here is the link: https://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/


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