"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Monday, April 11, 2016

Club Luna

Don’t miss Afanasii
this Friday night at Club Luna!

It will be an evening of
heavy metal sax, robotic swing,
and the introduction of his new band,
Out of This World Rhythm.

Don’t miss a chance to
dance like air isn’t polluted
and water is a free drink.

Ladies get in free with
Asthma Zone punch card
Drink of the night…
Half price Silver Sip h20.

©Susie Clevenger 2016

Day 11 #NaPoWriMo 


De said...

"Asthma Zone punch card" -- ;)

Debi Swim said...

Afanasii... ha, with the polluted air and expensive water it better be a fantasy -
We'll never learn not to trash our living space.

Ellecee said...

I like this, Susie, I feel like that's my kind of club,,:-)

Isadora Gruye said...

I love this so much. I read if four times and smiled more each time. It's clever, sardonic, and so so so so so good. Thanks for posting Susie.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Too dreadfully believable! You got the tone and the details just right.

brudberg said...

Oh this made me giggle, but it stuck in my throat - that polluted air made it close to real.

telltaletherapy said...

great touch of humour in this lovely light cynical piece about a suffocating environment - so enjoyable to read

Gemma Wiseman said...

Like a great announcement at the door of tempting entertainment. Leave the pollution behind if you can. Lively and different.

Hannah said...

Love this:

"Don’t miss a chance to
dance like air isn’t polluted"

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