Sandy Sky


Stars shine in a sandy sky,
the sea giving up its jewels
to burnish joy into eyes
turned ashen by sorrow.

©Susie Clevenger 2016


Prompt Nights - Take Me To The Ocean

Comments

Sanaa Rizvi said…
This is pure perfection :D thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights.


Lots of love,
Sanaa
February 26, 2016 at 2:15 PM
kaykuala said…
to burnish joy into eyes
turned ashen by sorrow

There will be some ways out of the bad moments. It normally works that way!

Hank
February 27, 2016 at 6:34 AM
Jae Rose said…
Like grit in the eye..polishing up for the outside world..i wonder how many of us do - a profound and shining poem
February 28, 2016 at 3:46 AM
Magaly Guerrero said…
I can feel these lines all the way to my bones.
February 28, 2016 at 7:02 AM
Buddah Moskowitz said…
So many emotions on this brief melange of words. Excellent.
February 29, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Anonymous said…
This is lovely
March 4, 2016 at 12:38 PM
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