I'm with Sanaa, I really like this, and though it is spot-on and predicts a rather gray future, surely wherever birds are involved, there has to be a way.
typing voiceless messages across lifeless, electronic palms. Human connection sacrificed to the digital blink of separation...... love the way you stated that. Too true.
Bravo for visiting the real world~ It is sad, how we are always connected digital-sometimes we need to be alone with ourselves~ Love, the view in your poem.
Your opening lines are so sensual...of the senses, a great contrast to the electronic, removed from life ending. So well expressed, Susie. It really has run rampant.
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Beautifully executed :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
across lifeless, electronic palms.
Human connection sacrificed to
the digital blink of separation...... love the way you stated that. Too true.
glass horizon"
is such a clever original twist and "seagulls...typing voiceless messages"! That is incredible. Very clever girl you are.