I loved you…
Well, as deeply
as sixteen can reach.
You were letters,
kisses, and diary entries.
You were never a poem.
You were too shallow
for the depth of verse.
If I were to steal from
the archive of my memories,
you would only be months spent
without punctuation.
©Susie Clevenger 2015
NaPoWriMo ~ Day 8
At Real Toads Marian gave us these instructions:
Dear Toads, your challenge today is to write about the experience of falling out of love with something you have written, even when others like it and want to hear or read it.
For me this piece is more about falling out of love with the thought this first love held any poetry.
Comments
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xoxo
I thought "too shallow for the depth of verse" was gonna be the stand out line but then OH that finish!
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