Beneath the
satin brash
I was soft silk.
I divided myself
into winks and
plump lips to fool
fools who thought
I was without a brain.
Take away
the blond, the breasts
the give, the take,
and you would have seen
the lock, the key,
the when, the why
to the me few could see.
I once had Eden, but
The Big Apple bit me.
The Catholics didn’t
like my either/or.
Life was great.
Life was bad.
Fame took
what it wanted.
I gave it all I had.
I let the world
see satin brash
when beneath
I was soft silk.
©Susie Clevenger 2015
Process note:
Mae West was famous for her double entendre. In a radio sketch titled The Garden of Eden on NBC Mae was cast as Eve and the actor, Don Ameche, as Adam. At one point in the dialogue she told Ameche to "get me a big one...I feel like doin' a big apple!" The reference was to a then-current dance craze. The day after the broadcast, the studio received letters calling the show "immoral" and "obscene." Women's clubs and Catholic groups admonished the show's sponsor, Chase & Sanborn Company, for "prostituting" their services and allowing "impurity" to invade the air. Wikipedia
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Comments
Hank
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Dad said she only showed her legs and never too much of anything else. He called her a lady.
I remember my mother imitating her when the occasion struck her in certain responses to my father. :-)
ZQ
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Loved this line:
"I let the world
see satin brash
when beneath
I was soft silk."
Gorgeous internal structure, there. I was a Don Ameche fan, to be sure. So many of the golden age actors and actresses were triple/quad threats in their skillsets. Models. Actors. Dancers. Singers. Such a strong people. Mae West was a gooder. Keep the writing coming. Pop in anytime at gravenrecords.blogspot.com