Last Leg April 23, 2015 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps He thought they had reached water under the bridge. She was tired of navigating emotions without any sense of direction. The last leg of too far left footprints that didn’t lead home. ©Susie Clevenger 2015 NaPoWriMo ~ 2015 Real Toads ~ Last Legs Comments Jim said… "Footprints that don't lead home" mean bigger problems than we had seen in the earlier verses... Rosemary Nissen-Wade said… Witty/sad — and so beautifully succinct. Outlawyer said… Hi Susie--you use known phrases so effectively here--thanks for participating at the end of the month. K. Ella said… This is sad, but sometimes our heart can't wear anymore treads~Powerful Sara McNulty said… Very clever! Sumana Roy said… chilling and sad.. Sherry Blue Sky said… Oh this is so powerful......leaving footsteps that didnt lead home. Perfect. Buddah Moskowitz said… Very poignant watching love die and all. Sanaa Rizvi said… Loved the use of phrases here in this beautiful piece...! :Dxoxo Kerry O'Connor said… Awww.. this is a sad realization to make.
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