This has such interesting context--seeds from intent--almost as if you are speaking in different spheres as the words are really very much from different worlds--seeds physical--intent mental--of course, one understands how they fit. Very interesting and works well to express the conflict and separation, Susie. Thanks. k. (http://manicddaily.wordpress.com)
There are those discussions -- eye to eye where only distances will grow.. This says it all, we have been there.. sometimes mending the bridges, but I recon that it will never be the same.
I just read the poem "Ember" at Cabernet Confessions, and this poem is similar, but with separate results. Your poem talks about two people who can't forgive and forget, or at least come to a compromise, where as in "Ember" it talks about keeping the coals burning, even among all the strife. I agree that there are moments when two people just can't agree, but keeping a warm heart in the end allows for some clarity I think.
This is subtle and makes one sift the meaning along with the seeds and intents that separate us, and of course, I love the use of the word division, which is also a kind of propagation, if in this case, not perhaps the one desired.
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Very nice
a sad end to something
namaste
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