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Sunday, November 17, 2013

Another Sunset ~ tanka

Another sunset scurries
across the horizon
to take daylight to someone else.
Alone, I watch twilight expose stars
and wonder if lies still sparkle in his eyes.

©Susie Clevenger 2013


Vandana Sharma said...

Nature's wonder and its implication on our life is profound.

Mama Zen said...

Gorgeous, Susie.

Loredana Donovan said...

Thought-provoking, Susie. I wonder what you mean by "lies" in his eyes ... perhaps betrayal? You have expressed a powerful emotion evoked by a beautiful sunset.

Bill Nicholls said...

That is just beautiful, I can picture the sunset

Heidi said...

That sparkle is so tempting, even when you know that it's all lies. I like it, Susie.

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