Another Sunset ~ tanka November 17, 2013 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Another sunset scurries across the horizon to take daylight to someone else. Alone, I watch twilight expose stars and wonder if lies still sparkle in his eyes. ©Susie Clevenger 2013 My Thoughts on Tanka (Part 3) ~ Hisashi Nakamura Comments Vandana Sharma said… Nature's wonder and its implication on our life is profound. Maude Lynn said… Gorgeous, Susie. Billy Blue Eyes said… That is just beautiful, I can picture the sunset Heidi said… That sparkle is so tempting, even when you know that it's all lies. I like it, Susie.
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