Lure of Fishnet

thigh high fishnets lure
tentative to swim closer
to temptation’s edge

sensuality’s
lure sets its hook in the flesh
then reels in the heart



© Susie Clevenger 2013

At Real Toads Peggy had us talking "fish." She let us go wherever our muse took us. Mine was wearing heels and hose. :) 
Real Toads ~ Take It From Here

Comments

Unknown said…
what a creative take... fantastic work. your words sounds wonderful aloud.
July 31, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Peggy said…
Love this one. I completely forgot about fishnet stockings! Great take on the prompt. thanks.
July 31, 2013 at 8:22 PM
Kay L. Davies said…
Wow, girl, you took this to a whole 'nother level. Love it!
K
July 31, 2013 at 8:42 PM
Vandana Sharma said…
oh! wow, yes indeed we are all fish lured by temptations...
July 31, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Anonymous said…
What a fantastic take! Love the way your mind works =)
August 1, 2013 at 3:16 AM
Maude Lynn said…
Oh, this is clever! I wish that I had thought of this.
August 1, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Kalpana said…
very creative! Something different. Really enjoyed it :)
August 1, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Kerry O'Connor said…
What a great metaphor.. very apt.
August 1, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Sharp Little Pencil said…
You sly thing, going for the sexy images, I loved it! The fishnets never occurred to me - and you know where my mind often rambles...

Creative, great economy of words, and fun read aloud. Brill. Amy
August 1, 2013 at 12:25 PM
De Jackson said…
AWESOME. What a fantastic take on the prompt. Love it.
August 1, 2013 at 1:18 PM
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