Stone May 31, 2013 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps It’s only a stone yet you covet its sparkle vanity’s display ~ + ~ casting the first stone to deflect introspection fingers bruised by lies © Susie Clevenger Haiku Heights #252 Stone Comments rallentanda said… ah...fingers bruised by liesyes..fantastic! Susie Clevenger said… Thank you rallentanda Jennifer Wagner said… It is only a stone, isn't it? ha...so true.And the second...just brilliant. LaTonya Baldwin said… i am glad i never cared for those stones. thanks for coming by. Anonymous said… These are both wonderful but that second one is beyond amazing! Nanka said… A varied take on stone and you have done it amazingly!! Whoever said that stone lacks weight or feeling, or expressions, or movement. You have it all there!! Maggie Grace said… Agree that second haiku is brilliant! Wow. Susie Clevenger said… @Poet Laundry, Thanks so much!@LaTonya, thanks. I was happy to stop by your blog. :)@minlovemisery, Thank you! Susie Clevenger said… @Nanka, thank you so much. I haven't written haiku in a while. It is good to return to it.@Maggie Grace, thank you! Gemma Wiseman said… Love the idea of "vanity's display"! And the second haiku represents some challenging thoughts! Susie Clevenger said… Gemma, thank you. It has bee quite a while since I tackled haiku. Susan Shuman said… Very insightful. Nice job! Magical Mystical Teacher said… I suspect that many of us have bruised fingers!Brick or Stone Reading Pleasure said… These are so brilliantly done Anonymous said… I like both of these but am drawn to the second. casting the first stoneto deflect introspectionfingers bruised by liesMy response poem:the rattle of pebblesknock dark the light of lightbut cannot kill truth
Comments
yes..fantastic!
And the second...just brilliant.
@LaTonya, thanks. I was happy to stop by your blog. :)
@minlovemisery, Thank you!
@Maggie Grace, thank you!
Brick or Stone
casting the first stone
to deflect introspection
fingers bruised by lies
My response poem:
the rattle of pebbles
knock dark the light of light
but cannot kill truth