Black Lace of Misconceptions May 01, 2013 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Mama Zen has given us "unprompted" as our theme for writing. It seems lately I have had many unprompted conversations with narrow minds. Words Count With Mama Zen Comments Lisa Williams said… "black laced words of misconception" love this line, great poem. Fireblossom said… Love the twist you gave this. Anonymous said… Very nice. I love the "black lace misconceptions." Sherry Blue Sky said… Oh those "black laced words of misconception". Great write, Susie. TCPC said… sharp! loved it! Vandana Sharma said… LOVED THE WAY YOU HAVE EXPRESSED IT, INSTEAD OF LIFTING COMPLETE TRUST,,,, NICE LINES Ella said… I love this and the black lace slap...oooh, so good~ Kay L. Davies said… Wonderfully done, Susie. Only a few well-chosen words, but with a lot of punch!K Helen said… .. might have to pull this one out of my back pocket someday!!! Unknown said… Fabulous metaphorical piece. Message intense and nicely wrapped. Maggie Grace said… Agree with all before me. Such eloquence and singeing (?) of your last line! Mary said… I really like the strength of your words here, Susie. I always appreciate someone who says it just as it is. Maude Lynn said… This is so creative! Smart write, Susie.
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