Everything this form should be and more, in my opinion--the first is heavy and dark, yet perfectly balanced--the second just beautiful, and one more word would be too many.
The photos are just the start... the "blood red moon" a perfect description, as it rises through autumn leaves. These were both set in nature, too, which is part of the Japanese haiku! Nicely done, Susie! Amy
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when twilight dances
with sunset
This a beautiful short poem which can be turned into a memorable haiku:
twilight...
dancing with
sunset
Thank you Susie.
And these images are overwhelmingly beautiful.
Grace
K
Vivid and romantic ;D