Surfing the Wind



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           surfs
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          ground.
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©Susie Clevenger 2013

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Comments

Laura said…
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articulated:-)
February 11, 2013 at 5:53 AM
Laurie Kolp said…
The leaves have been surfing a lot lately... sometimes even jet skiing.
February 11, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
I love it. That is exactly how it looks, falling. Mesmerizing.
February 11, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Other Mary said…
Very visual, the leaves here (what few are left) are skating on the breeze - brrr!
February 11, 2013 at 11:47 AM
Herotomost said…
Your creativity knows know bounds...just like your taste in music. Very cool.
February 11, 2013 at 12:18 PM
Jim said…
Hi Neighbor, I love your shape poem. The words too. Very cleverly done.
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February 11, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Helen said…
GIRL ???? You are making me dizzy. (love the form and the poem)
February 11, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Robert Gibson: PWES Editor said…
Smiling big time. Loved the visuals :)
February 11, 2013 at 1:29 PM
vivinfrance said…
a beautiful form for the graceful leaf fall.
February 11, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Margaret said…
...surfs its way

Yes, they do. Very cute.
February 11, 2013 at 9:31 PM
Mixi said…
Following the trail of letters felt like floating gently down. A great visual treat. Creativity at its best!
February 12, 2013 at 2:12 AM
LLM Calling said…
I love visual poems, wonderful
February 12, 2013 at 2:26 AM
Kerry O'Connor said…
This is such a delight! It put me in mind of e.e. cummings' 'snowflake'.
February 12, 2013 at 7:30 AM
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