"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Friday, October 12, 2012

Just Call Me Crazy

Spontaneous gives
the appearance
of mentally unstable.
I rather like the view.

Let me wear bright orange
when the rest of the world
is dressed in drab shades of normal.

Smile a smug smile and introduce
me as unique, and I will respond,
“Thank you, but just call me crazy.”

©Susie Clevenger 2012
Marian Kent at Real Toads prompted us to use the inspiration
 of Waylon Jennings to create our written piece. 


Marian said...

drab shades of normal, sigh.
today i wore my bright turquoise raincoat and figured, what the hell, maybe i'm crazy :)
xo susie!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I, too, love the "drab shades of normal". Great response to the prompt, Susie. I am, as always, Behind.

Susan said...

"Spontaneous gives
the appearance
of mentally unstable.
I rather like the view."

a studied effect!
Very funny in a sad way.

my heart's love songs said...

that's the right kind of crazy to be! wonderful take on the prompt!

sreeja harikrishnan said...

that's cool....<3 <3 <3

Kerry O'Connor said...

The second stanza really speaks to the artist in all of us.

Grace said...

I like bright orange instead of drab shades of normal ~ Lovely share ~

Helen said...

Crazy has so many connotations ... your take is great!!! I listened to Patsy Cline sing 'Crazy' yesterday on an old CD ... another good kind of crazy.

Willow said...

Wonderful, I love this. Unique is often termed as crazy, or other less than desirable definitions. Unique works for me.

De Jackson (WhimsyGizmo) said...

"I rather like the view."

Me, too. Normal is overrated.
LOVE this.

Hannah said...

Nice!! Your second stanza...I totally agree...well said! :)

Mystic_Mom said...

Susie my new anthem is this! Great write!

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