Perhaps If I Burn



This was inspired by Kenia's Wednesday Challenge at Real Toads

Comments

Fireblossom said…
I love this, Susie, and I also love the candle light!
June 13, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Susan said…
Ohhhh. . . . deep sigh . . . .
June 13, 2012 at 8:42 PM
Marian said…
love it, almost like sending a smoke signal. please notice!
June 13, 2012 at 9:30 PM
Siggi in Downeast Maine said…
Lovely.
thanks.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
June 13, 2012 at 10:38 PM
Kerry O'Connor said…
Yes, that is very beautiful - a poetic wholeness which I love.

PS.. Such beautiful handwriting as I can only envy!
June 14, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
Whoa! This is fantastic - words and presentation. Wonderful!
June 14, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Lolamouse said…
Ooh! HOT! I love this! The candle is a great touch too.
June 14, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Kay L. Davies said…
"Perhaps you will come to me when you see the flame" is just fabulous, Susie. Great presentation, too.
K
June 14, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Peggy said…
I like this and the presentation as well. Excellent and mysterious response to the prompt!
June 14, 2012 at 2:23 PM
Mary said…
Beautiful in every way.
June 14, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Kenia Cris said…
oh! I can so relate, Susie! I tell you I had to find real bravery inside me to step up and text this guy my last poem. I wanted to vomit, and after that I wanted to hide my head in a hole on the ground, I was so embarrassed! But his response was positive after all. I'm glad I did it. :)

Just in case you didn't read it back at IGWRT, I'm so happy you got enough inspiration for two poems. <3 I'm going to the second one now. Kisses dear. :)
June 14, 2012 at 10:27 PM
Hannah said…
Oh, I hope he comes when he sees the flames!! This is such a lovely presentation, Susie. :)
June 15, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Ella said…
Beautiful...I love the flames and thoughts that surround your words~
Be still your heart~
You do have gorgeous handwriting! :D
June 15, 2012 at 10:51 PM
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