Night ~ Tanka May 10, 2012 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps The night puddles under the oak tree in broken stars and shadows, the wind painting a Monet with its branches. ©Susie Clevenger 2012 Photograph: All HD Wallpapers Real Toads ~ Journey's End Comments Preeti S. said… Wow. Beautiful imagery.. :) Anonymous said… For some reason, this poems holds a bit of mystery for me. Nice flow. The Unknowngnome said… Tanka and picture coalesce.It is a Monet, no wait, it's a Clevenger and a bleepin' good one!:) Kerry O'Connor said… This is excellent, Susie. I especially like your use of the word 'puddles' and 'broken'. They add such depth to a short piece. Karen said… I love the feel of this, it's beautiful. Marian said… awwwww. just beautiful. Teresa said… What a wonderful poem, and the picture is perfect~night and mystery. Fireblossom said… Pretty! Ella said… Oh, Susie, this is wonderful~I love the mystery and magic in your journey! :D Mystic_Mom said… Love! Love! Love! Hannah said… Oh, this is such a rich image you've painted, Susie! So pretty! Anonymous said… Love this tanka -- wonderful imagery!! :)
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It is a Monet, no wait, it's a Clevenger and a bleepin' good one!
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I love the mystery and magic in your journey! :D