A Renga in Progress

Grace O'Malley at Real Toads has challenged us to write a renga. A renga is a long Japanese poem, a series of very short verses in an alternating pattern, built by the group. There are links and references scattered within the greater poem, and each verse is related without being repetitive.




stars wink at rainbow feathers
that tease with each fluttering                           



Comments

Kerry O'Connor said…
This is such an interesting exercise - to see how each thought leads to the next. I love the inclusion of the stars.
April 11, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Grace O'Malley said…
Every single person has brought their own style to the piece. It's amazing.
April 11, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Margaret said…
feathers teasing, stars winking ... lovely!
April 11, 2012 at 5:52 PM
Other Mary said…
Wonderful - I love where you're taking this!
April 11, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said…
So beautiful!!!!!!!!!
April 11, 2012 at 9:46 PM
Mystic_Mom said…
Ooooh....sigh...love!
April 12, 2012 at 1:07 AM
Kay L. Davies said…
So pretty, Susie, with stars and rainbows and feathers, it opens the group poem process up to a world of possibilities. Well done.
K
April 12, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Jinksy said…
The picture changes to a fan dancer...:)
April 13, 2012 at 4:26 AM
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