"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Thursday, April 5, 2012

Deserted ~ Haiku

an ebony night
stars deserted by the moon
shadows walk unseen

©Susie Clevenger 2012


Fred Rutherford said...

Cool haiku. Really like how you incorporated a prevailing image. Darkness/deserted/shadow- very nicely done. Thanks

Enigmatic Soul said...

Eerie and desolate using captivating imagery. Well done. I like it.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Beautiful image in words - I could see the whole night scene so clearly.

Ben Ditty said...

I love reading your poems on here even if I mostly read on Facebook :)

Ellecee said...

I felt myself walking in the darkness too, and darker still when you use the word "ebony". A special haiku.

beccagivens said...

Love the imagery, Susie!! :)

Ed Pilolla said...

one of my favorite haikus you have written, separate images brought together as one, from the sky to the street.

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