Deserted ~ Haiku April 05, 2012 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps an ebony night stars deserted by the moon shadows walk unseen ©Susie Clevenger 2012 Comments Unknown said… Cool haiku. Really like how you incorporated a prevailing image. Darkness/deserted/shadow- very nicely done. Thanks Preeti S. said… Eerie and desolate using captivating imagery. Well done. I like it. Kerry O'Connor said… Beautiful image in words - I could see the whole night scene so clearly. Ben Ditty said… I love reading your poems on here even if I mostly read on Facebook :) Ellecee said… I felt myself walking in the darkness too, and darker still when you use the word "ebony". A special haiku. Anonymous said… Love the imagery, Susie!! :) Ed Pilolla said… one of my favorite haikus you have written, separate images brought together as one, from the sky to the street.
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