He drove it there to rust,
to free it like it was a stallion
that could not be tamed.
His youth had been lived
in four wheel drive
and whiskey shots.
The old truck had seen it all,
first kisses, lost virginity,
tears from losing a brother in Iraq.
It was his mobile confession booth
where only he, God, and the upholstery
knew the sins of a Saturday night.
He couldn’t let it end up in a junk yard.
to be picked apart by wrenched vultures
with no respect for its history.
This field on his grandfather’s farm
with tall grass and east Texas sun
would be his truck’s final resting place.
He knew he couldn’t, wouldn’t come back.
to see it decay into tin metal bones.
It was time to let go and move on.
©Susie Clevenger 2012
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where only he, God, and the upholstery
knew the sins of a Saturday night.
Wow... very earth, just loved this.
to see it decay into tin metal bones.
It was time to let go and move on."
Such wisdom in this, knowing when to let go. All things die eventually.
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K
This poem conjured up some "moments" for me too, also in trucks LOL, a long time ago but memorable.
You've captured the setting and the emotions so well...
http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/03/haiku.html
spirit as well.
well-written Susie.
Many of us men can be unsentimental slobs, but we also can connect history and emotion to something as seemingly ugly and mundane as a rusted bucket F-150 or Silverado.
Well captured here, young lady! ;)
~ j
where only he, God, and the upholstery
knew the sins of a Saturday night
nice...love that stanza...and i also like that in hte end he knew it was time to move on...and not look back...
Lovely!
Hank
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