Fate in Red



she waited in red
a breathing valentine heart
summoned there by fate


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temptation or fate
life played like a game of chess
seeking upper hand

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fate dealt alice hearts
it was no sweet sentiment
just an evil queen


©Susie Clevenger 2012
Haiku Heights #109 ~ Fate
1st Photograph: duitang.com
2nd Photograph: myspace.com
3rd Photograph: favim

Comments

Grace said…
What a triple treat...I like the twist and turn of fate ~

Have a good day ~
March 3, 2012 at 8:48 PM
Anonymous said…
Love the set -- the first one is my favorite!!
March 3, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Brian Miller said…
oo nice...the hearts dealt by fate are not always the kindest for sure...
March 3, 2012 at 10:31 PM
Vinay Leo R. said…
Life is somewhat a game of chess, very true.
March 3, 2012 at 11:09 PM
Ruchi Jain said…
the first one is superb, the lady in red exactly corresponding to your words..:)
March 3, 2012 at 11:41 PM
anthonynorth said…
These are excellently done, especially the last one.
March 4, 2012 at 3:44 AM
Laurie Kolp said…
Lovely, Susie... especially:

fate dealt alice hearts
it was no sweet sentiment
just an evil queen
March 4, 2012 at 7:43 AM
Geraldine said…
wonderful words! loved them all, especially the first one. tres romantic too!!!

I am added you to my followed blogs today too. great blog!
March 4, 2012 at 9:58 AM
Tigerbrite said…
Great. Reminded me of the Queen of Hearts in Alice in Wonderland.
March 4, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Kathy Reed said…
Such smart haiku, Susie; you have talent. Having just discovered this site, I may link up soon..
March 5, 2012 at 9:45 PM
dsnake1 said…
gorgeous.
suspenseful.
ironic.

enjoyed the entire set. and i liked the colour red. :)
March 7, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Asni said…
A very nice tale you've painted here. Love it!
March 7, 2012 at 6:57 PM
Chèvrefeuille said…
This is a well composed set of haiku Susie. Thank you for sharing
March 9, 2012 at 8:42 PM
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