"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Saturday, March 3, 2012

Fate in Red

she waited in red
a breathing valentine heart
summoned there by fate

- 0 -

temptation or fate
life played like a game of chess
seeking upper hand

- 0 -

fate dealt alice hearts
it was no sweet sentiment
just an evil queen

©Susie Clevenger 2012
Haiku Heights #109 ~ Fate
1st Photograph: duitang.com
2nd Photograph: myspace.com
3rd Photograph: favim


Grace said...

What a triple treat...I like the twist and turn of fate ~

Have a good day ~

beccagivens said...

Love the set -- the first one is my favorite!!

Brian Miller said...

oo nice...the hearts dealt by fate are not always the kindest for sure...

Leo said...

Life is somewhat a game of chess, very true.

Ruchi Jain said...

the first one is superb, the lady in red exactly corresponding to your words..:)

anthonynorth said...

These are excellently done, especially the last one.

Laurie Kolp said...

Lovely, Susie... especially:

fate dealt alice hearts
it was no sweet sentiment
just an evil queen

Fireblossom said...

Love it.

Geraldine said...

wonderful words! loved them all, especially the first one. tres romantic too!!!

I am added you to my followed blogs today too. great blog!

Tigerbrite said...

Great. Reminded me of the Queen of Hearts in Alice in Wonderland.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Fate does some weird things, for sure!

Fate Has Blessed Them

kkkkaty said...

Such smart haiku, Susie; you have talent. Having just discovered this site, I may link up soon..

dsnake1 said...


enjoyed the entire set. and i liked the colour red. :)

Asni said...

A very nice tale you've painted here. Love it!

Chèvrefeuille said...

This is a well composed set of haiku Susie. Thank you for sharing

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