The Haiku Challenge Day #6~Thoughts



they rattle, tumble
badgering my pounding head
i pray for silence

one random
thought
now multiplied



©Susie Clevenger
Photograph: Google Images
This is day 6 of 29 Haiku in 29 Days
Today’s theme is: Think
Today’s haiku form includes Pi-Ku
The Haiku Challenge

Comments

Andy Sewina said…
Yeah, that's a good prayer to pray, excellent pi-ku too!
February 5, 2012 at 7:40 PM
Anonymous said…
Have you been living in my head? Perfect!
February 5, 2012 at 7:41 PM
Cressida de Nova said…
Yep,that's a familiar scenario.Must be a poet thing:)
February 5, 2012 at 9:29 PM
becca givens said…
Apt description I can relate to ... very nice! Happy week, Susie!
February 6, 2012 at 12:50 AM
... said…
'one random
thought
now multiplied'

Splendid!
February 6, 2012 at 1:54 AM
Ben Ditty said…
Like how you switched up the traditional 5-7-5.
February 6, 2012 at 1:56 AM
Chèvrefeuille said…
What a great haiku and pi-ku. So well done on the prompt "think". Lovely picture too.
February 6, 2012 at 4:04 AM
Amber said…
This is something every human goes through I'm sure!
You make every reader relate to your writings. Lovely! :)
February 6, 2012 at 4:04 AM
Maude Lynn said…
I know how this feels! Great job!
February 6, 2012 at 8:07 AM
Brother Ollie said…
very good - I like how it has maney layers/ideas to explore...
February 6, 2012 at 11:58 AM
Karen said…
Try meditating! A terrific haiku - pi-ku combo.
February 6, 2012 at 1:38 PM
sonsylass said…
How true, Susie :-)
February 6, 2012 at 4:34 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thanks for the wonderful comments..my brain seems to always be thinking...insomnia and I know each other well.
February 6, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Concerned, Confused but Learning said…
Most people think all the time about random stuff. If only we could focus !!
February 7, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Someone is Special said…
one random thought can multiply to many.. Loved your Pi-Ku and Haiku..

Someone is Special
February 7, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Anonymous said…
Very clever--using the Pi-ku to talk about multiplying thoughts :)
February 27, 2012 at 4:21 PM
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