The Haiku Challenge Day #4 ~ The Flip Side of Emotions



the tears of folly
fall as sorrow’s acid rain
laughter will dry them

 ~0~

valentine heartstrings
severed by enmity’s knife
acts of love restore


©Susie Clevenger 2012
This is Day 4 29 Haiku in 29 Days
Today's Theme: Opposite Emotions
The Haiku Challenge


Comments

Gemma Wiseman said…
Love how you present the two "faces" of emotion that can co-exist! Creative!
February 3, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Fireblossom said…
I love those masks. They remind me of that old Twilight Zone episode, where people wore Mardi Gras masks that showed their true personalities, and then they couldn't get them off!
February 3, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Someone is Special said…
What should I type here? The second is too good.. :-)

Someone is Special
February 3, 2012 at 5:20 PM
Shauna said…
O. luv - acts of love restore -
oh yeah.
February 3, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Fireblossom. They are creepy.. :)
February 3, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thank you so much....Someone is Special
February 3, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Grace said…
I like the tears of folly and heart strings ~
February 3, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Ron. said…
"...sorrow's acid rain..."
Brilliant.
February 3, 2012 at 6:02 PM
br!nDle said…
Just Loved it...The Combination Of Valentine's Heart and Enmity's Knife...Wow...
I am a new fan of Your's...(:
February 3, 2012 at 9:51 PM
becca givens said…
Susie - I always love the images you pair with your outstanding work ... never disappoints!! Bravo!!
February 4, 2012 at 12:34 AM
Chèvrefeuille said…
Wow! Susie ... I hope my THC day 4 is as strong and beautiful as yours.
February 4, 2012 at 12:56 AM
Karen said…
Both excellent, with a positive outcome in the last lines.
February 4, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Amber said…
Phew! this is awesome!!
February 4, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Beyond Horizon said…
Laughter will surely dry them.

Brilliant is the word for whole of it :)
February 4, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Beyond Horizon said…
Laughter will surely dry them.

Brilliant is the word for whole of it :)
February 4, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Susie Swanson said…
Love it, it paints emotions so well..
February 4, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thank you so much br!nDie and thank you for becoming a follower of my blog!!
February 4, 2012 at 4:43 PM
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