The Haiku Challenge # 12 ~ The Sunshine of Butterflies


my world turned yellow
with fluttering butterflies
joy arrived on wings

the sunshine of butterflies

joy arrived on wings
with fluttering butterflies
my world turned yellow


©Susie Clevenger 2012
Image: popularscreensaver.com
29 days of 29 Haiku prompt: colors
Poetry Form: Naisaiku
The Haiku Challenge

Comments

Gemma Wiseman said…
O how delightful! Adore the words ... sunshine of butterflies!
February 11, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Asni said…
"Joy arrive on wings" - love it!
February 11, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Maude Lynn said…
This is really pretty!
February 11, 2012 at 5:44 PM
Lolamouse said…
Butterflies are indeed joyful! Lovely!
February 11, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Denise Moncrief said…
I love the mirroring. Lovely haiku.
February 11, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Scarlet said…
I like the sunshine in your words...beautiful picture too ~

Grace
February 11, 2012 at 9:21 PM
Sri Valli said…
Loved it..Butterflies!!..I love them....Thanks for writing on butterflies...
February 12, 2012 at 12:33 AM
becca givens said…
I feel like I am flitting about ... I love butterflies ... they flit and flutter and float! Great image to pair with your uplifting words!
February 12, 2012 at 12:38 AM
Andy Sewina said…
Butterflies, and yellow... right up my street!!!

Nicely!
February 12, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Amber said…
Butterflies are so lively and positive! I love them!
And they do bring joy!
I loved the line "joy arrived on wings"! Really nice! :)
February 12, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Susie Clevenger said…
Thanks to all of you for your kind words...I am so in love with butterflies.
February 12, 2012 at 11:43 PM
Someone is Special said…
Delightful Haiku Susie.. Loved it so much..
February 13, 2012 at 1:37 PM
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