TipToe


i wait on tiptoes
as I watch the sun rising
my day of dreams
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the dance of secrets
a shadow walk on tiptoe
discovery waits

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love’s tiptoe vigil
waiting for a matching heart
doubt has no foothold


©Susie Clevenger 2012
Photographs: Favim
Haiku Heights~ Prompt #103~Tiptoe
Haiku My Heart

Comments

anthonynorth said…
All of them are beautifully done.
January 21, 2012 at 2:46 AM
Grace said…
beautiful tiptoe haiku...i like that doubt has no foothold ~
January 21, 2012 at 7:49 AM
carol l mckenna said…
Very beautiful post ~ visual and words ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) linked w/HMH
January 21, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Fireblossom said…
I enjoyed this so much that I didn't even realize it was the hated (by me) haiku, until I saw the tag. Wonderful combination of beautiful images and gentle words... the perfect combination for a weekend morning!
January 21, 2012 at 9:28 AM
Chèvrefeuille said…
Hello Susie, I love these haiku and those pictures ... wonderful.
January 21, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Teresa said…
These are all wonderful! I really enjoyed the first best.
January 21, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said…
The tiptoe vigil can sometimes be a lonely one...

Shadowy Path
January 21, 2012 at 12:16 PM
Susie Clevenger said…
I thank each of you for your wonderful comments.@.Fireblossom so thankful you enjoyed the "hated" haiku :)
January 21, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Judith Westerfield said…
My favorite is the second. Wonderful imagery.
January 21, 2012 at 8:13 PM
Anonymous said…
lovely

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January 22, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Hazel said…
Beautiful! All three. Love the second one best - dance of secrets. That's magical to me.
January 23, 2012 at 3:53 AM
Ruchi Jain said…
very well written haiku and pictures are so enchanting.
January 24, 2012 at 8:53 PM
MyWordsWhisper said…
I love your use of pictures with your wonderful Haiku!
January 25, 2012 at 12:13 AM
becca givens said…
you never fail to disappoint! lovely set of tip toeing!
January 26, 2012 at 12:25 AM
Blossom Vydrina said…
these are lovely, and excellent photos matched up
January 27, 2012 at 2:02 PM
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