Alone


my fingertips touch
the empty air of alone
help me feel again

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there is no more us
a divided you and i
locked inside our pain

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serenity speaks
alone is the place to learn
the meaning of whole



©Susie Clevenger 2012
Photographs: Favim

Comments

Susie Swanson said…
I love this.. very beautiful and touching.. I'm going to really enjoy your posts.. Susie
January 10, 2012 at 7:25 PM
Ed Pilolla said…
an enlightened ending, and a good payoff. the alone tawk can be depressing by itself. i like the insight you leave us with, and you built up to it very well.
January 10, 2012 at 7:58 PM
Brian Miller said…
that first one is so evocative...i like the progression through them as well...
January 11, 2012 at 9:08 PM
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