Unopened November 05, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps love notes unanswered yellow pages gather dust mystery remains ©Susie Clevenger Comments anthonynorth said… This was poignant. excellent. Anonymous said… yes, who did write those love notes? Michelle My Bell said… Beautiful Susie...Also - I gave you an award on my blog today! Come by and grab it when you can :) dsnake1 said… what secrets do those pages hold?i like your use of "yellow pages", it gives a sense of age and time (or timelessness). lovely work! Anonymous said… Greater mystery .... are they unopened love notes? :-) Judith Westerfield said… Your haiku was a perfect and complete story. Like it! Nanka said… You created such a wonderful mystery here!! The curiosity is killing!! :D Ramesh Sood said… Just superb... I recall my post on 'Notebook' prompt on OSI...preserve these lovenotes well..not everyone will understand and interpret them with heart and soul.. Priyanka Bhowmick said… let it remain a mystery.. I love that thought u portrayed. Anonymous said… I love the mysteriousness of it. Lovely. Unknown said… Great haiku and the photo to go with it. Nice job. Cassiopeia Rises said… Excellent Haiku. Wonder what is in those love letters.Melanie Ruchi Jain said… This is a true mystery... Anonymous said… This really captures "mystery"--love it! Magical Mystical Teacher said… There's nothing more mysterious than an opened letter of any kind--which is why I just can't bear to leave envelopes unopened!Sunflower Mystery Almas Kiran Shamim said… :) and some love notes are better left unopened... :) Almas Kiran Shamim said… :) and some love notes are better left unopened... :)
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Also - I gave you an award on my blog today! Come by and grab it when you can :)
i like your use of "yellow pages", it gives a sense of age and time (or timelessness).
lovely work!
:-)
Melanie
Sunflower Mystery