"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Sunday, November 27, 2011

Love's Oblivion

the world gone silent
secluded in joined heartbeats
love’s oblivion

 ©Susie Clevenger 2011
Free Write Friday Photo Prompt


sparksinshadow said...

This is a lovely caption for the photo. :)

Brian Miller said...

nice the picture is evocative itself...the homecoming...missing someone so much you run into their arms...yes i think the world stops in that moment...

Janet said...

My heart did a delicious flip as I read this...:) Thank-you for sharing your keen mind with us.

Ben Ditty said...

Those lines really complement each other. Nicely done. Love's oblivion is such a great concept. Can taste the metaphor. Mmm.

Michelle My Bell said...

I KNOW how wonderful that feels when everything else seems not to exist around you when you're in the arms of a loved one. Beautiful sweetie!

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