worded oblivion September 20, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps surrounded by life technology eclipses response to human contact text messages replace the sound of another’s voice in worded oblivion ©Susie Clevenger 2011 Photo Prompt Poets United http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2011/09/midnight-snack-003.html#comments Comments The Unknowngnome said… Short and to the point like a cold text with no voice. Nice piece.You may want to fix the link that you used on the PU site for this post. The current link leads to your post "Betrayal".:) The Unknowngnome said… :) Unknown said… Terrific use of dual haiku to create a cohesive story. The value of each word rings through here. Nice! Laurie Kolp said… Powerful and a sad truth about the world we live in today. Susannah said… Really nicely done, and a very good onservation.
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You may want to fix the link that you used on the PU site for this post. The current link leads to your post "Betrayal".
:)