"I am hearing poetry when awake, dreaming poetry when asleep, breathing poetry with each breath, I am living in a poem."

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

worded oblivion

surrounded by life
technology eclipses
response to human contact

text messages replace
the sound of another’s voice
 in worded oblivion

©Susie Clevenger 2011
Photo Prompt Poets United


The Unknowngnome said...

Short and to the point like a cold text with no voice. Nice piece.

You may want to fix the link that you used on the PU site for this post. The current link leads to your post "Betrayal".


The Unknowngnome said...


Kim Nelson said...

Terrific use of dual haiku to create a cohesive story. The value of each word rings through here. Nice!

Laurie Kolp said...

Powerful and a sad truth about the world we live in today.

Susannah said...

Really nicely done, and a very good onservation.

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