Secrets~Senryu September 01, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps secrets were sleeping inquisitive’s alarm clock awakened the past ©Susie Clevenger 2011 Height of Haiku Challenge September- 30 haikus in 30 days Prompt day 4: any topic My choice: Secrets Comments Grace said… love the creativity here ~ you are ahead in this challenge great pieces ~ judithwesterfield said… This is wonderful. Truly Ron. said… Very cool. Let in the light. Anonymous said… What a great senryu (still need to get my head around the difference between senryu & haiku)Very clever use of words especially the idea of inquisitive's alarm clock awakening the past.Thanks for a great read. Cassiopeia Rises said… Lovely Haiku. It brings back happy memories of my sister and I. Well done my friendMelanie Tarang Sinha said… Nice haiku and cute picture:) Vinay Leo R. said… different ending.. i hope the sad past stays sleeping :) Magical Mystical Teacher said… Yeah, old Inquisitive just doesn't know when to leave well enough alone!Day 4: Corn in the Wash Susie Clevenger said… Leo..love your haiku for flourish...what beautiful gardens we can have with the weeds gone...for some reason I still can't scroll down the page... :(
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you are ahead in this challenge
great pieces ~
Very clever use of words especially the idea of inquisitive's alarm clock awakening the past.
Thanks for a great read.
Melanie
Day 4: Corn in the Wash