Moonlit Revelry



moonlit revelry
inhibitions seek freedom
spirit rejoices

forget tomorrow
its shadow bullies horizon
with supposed regrets

tonight your ballroom
dance under starlight lanterns
yesterday is gone


©Susie Clevenger 2011
Haiku Friday at Haiku My Heart


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Comments

Fran aka redondowriter said…
Remembering to live in the now is hard but necessary. I love your dancer.
September 17, 2011 at 1:32 AM
foxysue said…
ooh I like this, yes how good would this feel dancing on a moonlit rooftop under the stars! wonderful.

Sue x
September 17, 2011 at 1:36 AM
Ron. said…
I'm definitely up for dropping inhibitions. A ballroom dance, however, would be mere prelude...

Solid work, Ms Clevenger. Salute!
September 17, 2011 at 5:03 AM
Ed Pilolla said…
bullies: what an amazing action to drop in. that is so original to describe tomorrow. i really liked this a lot.
September 17, 2011 at 2:21 PM
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