Love Chime September 15, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps love struck my heartbeat a chime reviving the hope romance is not dead ©Susie Clevenger Height of Haiku Challenge September-30 Haikus in 30 Days Prompt Day 16: Chime Comments Vinay Leo R. said… I wonder if such a love can ever fall. I hope and pray not! It is divine! Gemma Wiseman said… Beautiful metaphor in that first line setting the moment of the haiku! Shauna said… sweet haiku and pic. Anonymous said… Wonderful use of the prompt--like the photo as well :) Amity said… Beautiful thoughts and I love it!This must be a great love story! Ron. said… Line from a '60s song: ...a distant bell starts chiming love...Love your work, SC! Nanka said… Lovely tinkling strains in the heart!! Nice chimes to hear!! Tarang Sinha said… Beautiful haiku! Anonymous said… I'm glad it chimed. Always sad when it doesn't. Cassiopeia Rises said… Lovely my friend. Let us hope love comes through.Melanie Judith Westerfield said… Love struck my heart beat. wonderful line Magical Mystical Teacher said… This is just a lovely little word picture!Chimes here and here and here
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This must be a great love story!
Love your work, SC!
Melanie
Chimes here and here and here