Hidden~Senryu September 07, 2011 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps if I bite my tongue i can keep my love hidden please lips be silent ©Susie Clevenger 2011 Height of Haiku Challenge September-30 Haikus in 30 days Prompt Day 8: Hidden Comments Grace said… Secrets..how we keep them ~ andy sewina said… Phew, that's a tough call!Nicely!! ShonEjai said… You haiku is very powerful. Great job! I love it! Lisa said… Hidden love - very sad.InspiredbyLisa Anonymous said… Such love ... dare to be spoken!! Tough ~~ nicely done! knot2share said… why do we all try to hide the love?? Ron. said… Solid senryu; greatly enjoyed. Seems we're on the same wavelength on this prompt. Ramesh Sood said… I like the way you said it... Nanka said… A slip betwixt tongue and lip?? Don't bite it hard for sooner or later it has to come out!! Anonymous said… A beautiful senryu.So much captured in so few words. Magical Mystical Teacher said… An impossible task?Hidden things here and here and here Anonymous said… this is so original my heart kinda dropped after I read this, it's terrific! Vinay Leo R. said… ah. but will heart support lips and tongue?
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Nicely!!
InspiredbyLisa
So much captured in so few words.
Hidden things here and here and here