Heart Notes


music claimed my heart
it heard the loneliness there
and filled it with notes



©Susie Clevenger 2011
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Comments

Ed Pilolla said…
this is a little enchanting. i like its energy, especially with the art. you know, those notes are nice and small and do look more like ornate design than notes, so i think its great. you really do tight, cohesive packages very well with text and art:)
September 24, 2011 at 4:01 PM
Anonymous said…
Wonderfully optimistic! And I know music can do this.
September 24, 2011 at 4:01 PM
Almas Kiran Shamim said…
music is that which can erase our loneliness and also make us feel lonely in a big crowd....
music is powerful....
so are ur words.. :)
September 24, 2011 at 4:40 PM
LSH said…
this is a very special haiku!
'enchanting' is the word! lovely!
September 24, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Saras said…
Beautiful picture and exquisite lines of Haiku.
September 24, 2011 at 11:04 PM
vivinfrance said…
Music, the food of love, makes a lovely senryu.
September 24, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Ron. said…
Unique artwork, enhanced by very fine writing. congratulations.
September 24, 2011 at 11:41 PM
Nanka said…
Beautiful and the picture well compliments your words!! Like the feeling of heart being filled with a symphony!!
September 25, 2011 at 5:15 AM
Anonymous said…
I love the idea of musical notes filling the gap left by loneliness/
A great read Susie.
September 25, 2011 at 8:11 AM
andy sewina said…
Wonderful, the way music can hit the spot!
September 25, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said…
music claims many hearts,

love the way you convey your emotions.
stunning one.
September 25, 2011 at 1:16 PM
Magical Mystical Teacher said…
How kind of the music! How blessed you are!

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September 25, 2011 at 6:29 PM
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