Babalon's Cup


babalon raises
elixir of love and death
many seek her cup


©Susie Clevenger
Photograph: Photobucket
September-30 Haikus in 30 Days
Prompt Day 14: Elixir


Comments

Rekha said…
A temptress with ready seekers no doubt... unique take on the prompt.
I think this is one cup I will avoid, thank you!

A Little Elixir
Another good haiku!

And thanks for writing your first limerick and submitting it to this week's Limerick-Off. Now that you've broken the ice, I hope you'll be a regular participant! :)
Ramesh Sood said…
Well, whatever, I liked the way you have put it.. well done..
Wonderful, I love this very much.


Melanie
Anonymous said…
A great haiku.
This is certainly one lady and one cup to avoid.
Anonymous said…
Rather glad I'm past all that :)
TraciB said…
Great haiku - I've been reading in Proverbs about a similar seductress; the warnings are clear that her company leads to ruin.